Maybe Michael plans to have a baby with Rachel so she will stay married.

The last part I hate it..,.everything was going so fast but at end it was so slow eh just because Michael sign it doesn't mean Rachel should sign it too...Michael have always played most of part..I wish she had atleast try be little confident. .silly girl but I like this story it was amazingggggggggggg...funny yet Sweet

Well this was super cute. in chapter 17 i really thought this was gonna be disappointing ending, but i love how it ended.

Great job in this novel thing-y1

-Crystal

So cute! If only we can all have this modernized fairy tale story to happen to all of us :D

Great story, so cute. Maybe you can do a one-shot of their official wedding?

No! Michael just said that because he was probably jealous of Justin! I don't like this lol.

I'm glad her mom forgave her.

Ughh how can she not like him? Michael is so sweet!

I hope they don't get a divorce! And Michael's family is so mince!

Hi,

I loved the preview of Speelbound...Is it going to be about vampires?

When is the posting of the first chapter?

tc

Aw cute story!

I was afraid they wouldn't get back together! Thankfully they did :)

you almost made me think they weren't coming back together anymore! wow, what a great story. thanks for writing. *~*kay

Hey well im in love with your stroy its so good

but the last chapter isnt working and well its killing me inside

so i waz wondering if you could send it 2me : ) Lol plz

or just tell me what happens if your 2lazy 2send it 2me i dont mind i just really want to know what happens

so yea

thnx lov ur story

love ur story and the idea of it cant wait 2read more

plz put up character pix just coz i love them :)

Awhh(: That was ADORABLE(:

I loved it.

(:

And I love Michael. Good work!(: