Reviews for Reinventing Rachel |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I'm so glad that you decided to end this story with a somewhat happy ending. I would have loved to see them back together for life but I'm sure that's how they will probably end up. Loved it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww! That was such a cute end to this story...it happened a little fast, but I definitely enjoyed reading it. Great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved your story, thank you so much for writing it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() The beginning of the epilogue was a bit essayish. Try making it more into a story. Otherwise, the rest was really cute! Good job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hm. I think this ending was rushed. It was okay, I guess. Not much to say; I hated Rachel, loved Michael and in the end I don't think she made up for all the things she made him go through. I wish you had made her work more fot Michael's love. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, I loved your story! And I am so happy they are together. I just think the last chapter was a bit fast compared with the rest. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow that was an awesome story~but thats not the end right? It shouldnt be its way too interesting!u |
![]() ![]() ![]() OH MY GOD are you KIDDING me? people are so stupid sometimes...myself included |
![]() ![]() ![]() NO! that's not what's supposed to happen! leaving me on such a cliff-hanger its, its, its just cruel... lol! can't wait for another update and they (hopeful) reunion of Michael and Rachel. :] |
![]() ![]() ![]() NO! SHE CANT SIGN THE PAPERS! .. cause then .. he better remind himself that he loves her soon or else that stupid justin guy is probably going to ruin it... i love the story !:) update soon please :) - kate |
![]() ![]() ![]() ? Woah! Unexpected! :( That sucks! I wanted them to stay married! Update soon! I would desperately love a plot twist! |
![]() ![]() ![]() A bit soon, I was expecting a few more chapters but it's still good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() T.T I'm depressed right now. Rachel should make sure that Michael saw the sadness in her eyes! Be selfish, he's like, the perfect guy! |
![]() ![]() ![]() NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO. :'[ OH MY GOD NO. Bahahah, this was SO not okay. LMAO. Jesus. I love Michael, I SERIOUSLY hope he was lying when he said it wasn't meant to be. RACHEL AND MICHAEL NEED TO BE TOGETHER. :) Hahaha, man, this story is GREAT(: UPDATE SOON PLEASE. Like now. Thanks! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh No! I really hope you're planning to fix this because that just made me very sad. :) |