Reviews for Reinventing Rachel |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for the REVIEW! I figured I would return the favor. You have a great character and an even greater set up. The best chemestry always starts with two characters who are completely the opposite. Am I right? Of course, I am! Make sure that your "howevers" are in the middle of the sentence. They always flow better there, for some reason. “I have a hard time believing that you broke into the school and moved all the desks on top of the roof.” I questioned with a smile.- That is more of a statement than a question. I really like Rachel. She is not one of those perfect, gorgeous characters that everyone is trying out. I like how she is real. Good JOB. R. Lauden |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw poor michael. hope you update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Kentucky. NICE. This is a great story. Update soon, please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome! so far! i cna't wait to see what happens! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't know if your trying to put humor in this or what, but I think this story is pretty funny...post soon! ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hello! Awh, he loves her! Great chapter, it's so sweet, and a fast read, I love it. Update soon! Suggestion: The description of the mother-in-law was a little weirdly worded. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like your story plot, it's original. I want to see where it's headed so please update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love your story! Keep it up! Michael sounds hawtt xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hahahahahahahahahahaha LOVE THIS. I even like the short chapters, which is odd for me. Normally, if I don't get a frigging twelve page essay I'm annoyed, but it works well for this story :) x |
![]() ![]() ![]() i really like it so far can't wait for the next chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hello! Haha, I love this so much! I was so excited that you updated. :P I can't wait to read more! Awesome job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story, please update again soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice! Lol. I like the first three chapters, it seems like this won't be one of those cliched "girl drunkenly marries boy and they hash out their problems by falling in love." I'm not sure if I like Michael and Julia's nonchalance, though. They seem too... chill about the wedding. But I guess we'll learn more in the upcoming chapters. Good job. ] |
![]() ![]() ![]() so short : ( but it was good gives you an idea on everyones perspective on the marriage thing : ) hurry and update |
![]() ![]() ![]() haha reasle haha i love it cant wait for more hope you update soon like really really soon -ifly*hugs* |