|Reviews for Baby's Breath|
| RedNoble chapter 1 . 7/10/2011
I'm in awe for your great talent!
i have to admit, I've had to re-read this thrice because my slow mind just couldn't quite grasp the pure amazing-ness of this.
really well done. i can picture and feel for the character.
another great poem.
| Isca chapter 1 . 5/31/2009
"A part of me just waiting for a vessel." I think it's interesting that you chose the words 'a part of me.' Some people belive that a baby is born because a soul was looking for a home. But, the speaker suggests that there is a part of her soul that wants to be freed-how fascinating. :)