|Reviews for The Man I Call Master|
| Shini's Male Friend chapter 1 . 12/20/2009
I really loved this, you have a great imagination shini well done, it was great.
| Crimson.Soul.07 chapter 1 . 11/16/2009
I am truly speechless about your story plot. 0.0
It's not everyday you read these kind of stories, I must admit.
Your way of writing is very dramatic and strong.
| insaneoreos chapter 1 . 11/13/2009
| tarryfairy chapter 1 . 8/28/2009
Very well written, and very interesting! The characters are easy to fall in love with, which is impressive in such a short fic. I really feel where they're coming from and feel emotionally invested in what happens to them, and I can't get over how easy it was to fall in love with the story in such a short time!
It would be nice to see a little more about Aaron, though, like a little of his backstory, when he fell in love with James, was it before or after he became one of James' playthings, that sort of thing. Just because I'm curious :)
Also, I may or may not be in love with both of them, even though James is kind of an asshole to people he doesn't care about and because Aaron is so wonderfully contradictory. Keep up the amazing work!
| Blo0d StaiNed Rose chapter 1 . 7/23/2009
that was so sweet and cute...i lovedit seriously...very well written...:P
| yasminooo chapter 1 . 6/15/2009
that was rly nice! gr8 job ! :D:D
| Revontulet Zvezda chapter 1 . 6/11/2009
this was nice, although bullies fucking suck.
| JuraquilleAmie chapter 1 . 6/7/2009
this story was SO GOOD! I LOVE IT! (can you write a second chapter?)
| DYNAMic LOVE chapter 1 . 5/30/2009
O my goodness this is soo good i totally loved it. Wow this is just so good. wow great story. i loved it!
| CrimsonLilly chapter 1 . 5/30/2009
Heh heh...This was really something. An interesting plot,great characters and quite a twist - Though I must say I hoped it was Aaron :) Glad it was him. And it was so cute how James actually liked him even before he met his 'master'...And then how he submitted almost completely at the end,asking to be on top 'every once in a while'
| Mercedes Woods chapter 1 . 5/29/2009
Asshole characters are the best. I wish you had elaborated on James bullying other students more. Sometimes it was a little difficult to follow, such as when James is thinking. His thoughts are written the same way as dialogue, so I couldn't be sure when he was actually saying something.
It's an interesting story, though. I like that he'd been with his master and hadn't known it.