Reviews for Rough Draft |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! That was really great. You describe the emotions with such poignancy that you can honestly feel that same burning in your throat, and your pulse quickens and just everything blends together at once. It has beautiful coherence, and your repitition really heps to create the mood of the story instead of being like "she said that already, can we move on" so great job! I REALLY want to see what happens next! Update soon :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Update Soon Plese...!Love UR Story It'z Awesome! ] ] ] ] ] ] ] ] ] ] ] ] ] ] ] ] ] ] ] ] ] ] ] ] ] ] ] ] |