Reviews for Fear
Breathing Ice chapter 1 . 10/30/2009
'I am the opposite, the antonym, the identical twin to myself' loved this. and i loved the italics too
fleur de l'est chapter 1 . 8/4/2009
I liked the italics which makes the poem seem like a conscience talking, and the rhyme scheme again creats a lasting effect.
letyoursoultakeflight chapter 1 . 7/25/2009
I, for one, Love this! I especially love the last lines of the second two stanzas! Lovely :)
Mirabella chapter 1 . 5/29/2009
LOVE IT!

Very well done, and i agree, you dont need to add anything to it, it works the way it is.

And i am so glad you use rhyme in yor poems, not many on this site do and i think i like them best. :)

Well done!