Oh my gosh this story is amazing! Reading part 2 right now!

im surpirsed! the story is really good !

hey i just finished reading your story so far, its REALLY GOOD! update soon! i wanna know what happens lol.

ah

what's gonna happen!

dun dun dun

it's fine!

haha loved the rest of the chapter!

update soon!

AH this is torture please please update soon, I love a good read and sadly It's rare for me to find 'em on fictionpress now adays :(

That was a good chapter! Please update about Mia and Evan! That was a good story and the grammar and characters seemed well structured! Update soon!

Hey! Not bad. I liked this chapter! Can't wait until the next one!

AH! You updated!

Awesome!

That was an awesome chapter. You said it in the author's note though. I want to hear about Evan! I love him! :)

Update soon !

DON'T STOP THERE!

NO!

UPDATE!

please!

i am so into this!

you NEED to update!

Hey! Nice story, I really like it. You should definitely continue!

OH MY GOD! I cannot believe you ended the chapter at that point. So cruel! I'm dying to know how they manage to get out of the predicament! The fake naked thing is an absolutely brilliant idea. I loved the last chapter and this one. Awesome awesome stuff! The section on what happened to Evan's dad made me almost cry it's so sad. Now I understand why he led himself to be part of the plan and to be roped in my Marcus. But the fact that his brother basically said "sucks for you" when it was his idea to begin the kidnapping makes me think Evan should seriously think about staying away from his brother. If Leah does manage to trade herself for Mia will Evan and Mia work together to take down Marcus? I don't know how I could live with myself if my best friend was harmed because I was lusting after a kidnapper...

And yes, I hope you get more reviews because this is an amazing story. Thanks for the quick updates!

great story. i hope you update it soon or somin...its rely nice. great job at writin it

I just read all 10 chapters. This story is absolute perfection! Oh my gosh I love it so much! The details, dialogue, exposition...it's exactly what I want out of a story. The romance is even paced appropriately. There is so much cleverness and humor (mistaking Mia for Leah) and realism (pondering what being shot feelings like between heroes or villains) and the thought processes (Leah truly owing Mia one). I could go on and on. I absolutely love the story and hope you continue and update soon.

I really can't think of anything that needs improvement.

I will say I'm so into to Mia/Evan romance that I'm slightly less interested in what's going on with Leah/Jeremy. I don't think that's necessarily a bad thing though. lol.

I found this chapter started off slow but definetely left me wanting to read more. Actually, it is witty with a hint of satire. I look forward to the next chapter. Great job.