|Reviews for Blood Reign|
| unlockurdestiny chapter 2 . 12/24/2009
A Vampire story perhaps? Pretty interesting ! i love how your stories leave us guessing. Update soon !
| inSAMniac chapter 1 . 8/11/2009
i decided to review! :D
i remember you telling me that you were going to slow down the pace and i agree because it went by a little fast.
but other than that awesome.
you should update :P
| shinji the useless chapter 1 . 5/31/2009
your summary caught my attention so props for that.
I like the names of your characters, but since it's only the first chapter i can't really say much more on them, maybe put more depth in their introduction. example: show how Amelia and Vanessa became friends besides being in the same class. show us why Leo feels the need to hang himself
The scenes jumped a lot and i had a hard time keeping track on who was in which scene, or understanding what exactly was happening in the scene and understanding the revelence of it.
you have a few spelling errors like "breath": i think you meant "breathe".
Other than those it was a good read. just watch out for typos, your scene changes and your telling. show a little more and give some depth.
good luck, shinji
| sasha blue chapter 1 . 5/29/2009
i dig it