Aw, I love it :D :D

Aww. That's really cute. I love her 'God of Reminding' quips.

CHEERS!

~Jeni

I like the immediacy of this piece as well, although I think Kady's relationship with Tyler could use a little more explanation in this one. At times, it seems like they're complete strangers (her musings about him being unattainable) and then sometimes they seem like friends (the way she accepts his invitation to dinner without much thought). It was hard to work out what type of relationship they had. In the sequel, it's clearer they're friends by their dialogue but it seems more murky in this one.

The ending is a bit rushed, but you know that. I guess in this one too, more of a build-up would help? The idea of Tyler going on the ride a gazillion times so he can talk to Kady is really cute. The God of Reminding repetition works well too. Any more stories with these characters?

aw

this story is so cute!

keep up the good work!

heehee, Tyler is one addicting human boy. :D

and Kady, lucky girl!

so cute, you need to like, write an entire oneshot series with the two of them or something.

O! This was really good!

Aww what an enjoyable little piece of cliched fluff :P

I was in the mood for one of those.

I really like it :D

Hah! Great read! I loved it. :)

I liked it a lot! Of course, I love fluff. But it was well-written and very engaging! Good job!

Good one-shot!