Reviews for Amusement Parks and Car Rides
APassionForReadingAndWriting chapter 1 . 11/5/2013
Aw, I love it :D :D
Jeni D chapter 1 . 7/23/2011
Aww. That's really cute. I love her 'God of Reminding' quips.


squiggle-line chapter 1 . 9/5/2009
I like the immediacy of this piece as well, although I think Kady's relationship with Tyler could use a little more explanation in this one. At times, it seems like they're complete strangers (her musings about him being unattainable) and then sometimes they seem like friends (the way she accepts his invitation to dinner without much thought). It was hard to work out what type of relationship they had. In the sequel, it's clearer they're friends by their dialogue but it seems more murky in this one.

The ending is a bit rushed, but you know that. I guess in this one too, more of a build-up would help? The idea of Tyler going on the ride a gazillion times so he can talk to Kady is really cute. The God of Reminding repetition works well too. Any more stories with these characters?
ithinkyourgay chapter 1 . 8/2/2009

this story is so cute!

keep up the good work!
toffeecakesxox chapter 1 . 8/1/2009
heehee, Tyler is one addicting human boy. :D

and Kady, lucky girl!

so cute, you need to like, write an entire oneshot series with the two of them or something.
pigwidgeon road chapter 1 . 7/21/2009
O! This was really good!
Danariana chapter 1 . 6/1/2009
Aww what an enjoyable little piece of cliched fluff :P

I was in the mood for one of those.

I really like it :D
JamieBell chapter 1 . 5/31/2009
Hah! Great read! I loved it. :)
jeepers09 chapter 1 . 5/30/2009
I liked it a lot! Of course, I love fluff. But it was well-written and very engaging! Good job!
MarloCarlo10 chapter 1 . 5/30/2009
Good one-shot!