|Reviews for Fireworks|
| annoyance chapter 1 . 5/30/2009
I didn't quite understand. Did he really kill her?
| aprilsunshine chapter 1 . 5/30/2009
This is very good!
The descriptions were visceral and just right. My favorite description was the chain on the door you kept referring to.
I would have liked to see a bit more of Caleb's character though. Within this brief story, he seemed a bit flat. Obviously, something is wrong with him but because I know so little about him as a person beyond the fact he is Alison's alluring knight in shining armor, I'm not really compelled to care. Or maybe this is just the beginning of a longer story and I'll get more information the next chapter?
Regardless, I hope to see more of your writing soon.