DAMN DAMN DAMN-GOTTA GO-NEED NEXT CHAPTER!

This is something new but I don't think she quite realizes what she has gotten herself into at this time! Tabari is damn good tracker so there is going to be some MAJOR INTENSE scenes coming up is my guess anyway. OUT OF THIS WORLD!

I guess this answered Sirus' doubts he started to have-she IS his mate and I can just IMAGINE that Jaime is HATING herself! Winter-I AM COMPLETELY HEAD OVER HEELS HERE!

Well he finally got his girl and DAMN IF SHE DOESN'T HAVE STRENGTH-werewolf or not! You have kept the SUSPENSE, INTENSITY and EMOTIONS RAMPANT from the very beginning which has COMPLETELY INTRIGUED ME! I AM FANTABULOUSLY ENTHRALLED WITH THIS STORY!

WELL I WASN'T EXPECT THIS! She is one SMART COOKIE as well as SPUNKY! I LOVE your characters here, I LOVE the PLOT/STORY and I AM IN LOVE WITH YOUR WRITING ABILITY!

OK-I got my answer! He was there when her family and pack were killed but Sirus wasn't behind the attack and she is mistaken-BUT EASILY SO! I ADORE how she seems to be able to OUT MANEUVER HIM THO-OUT OF THIS WORLD!

Ok Winter please one question to clear me up-which Alpha was on the bike the night her whole pack was killed? Sirus or the other one Stevie was talking too or if easier (which I don't always tend to be) which one kissed her? I want to say it was Sirus there when her family was killed because she recognized his scent but my head cold has the better part of me being able to reason well! YOU AMAZE THE HELL OUT OF ME!

OH BLOODY HELL-this was COMPLETELY INTENSE that I held my BREATH THRU ALMOST THE WHOLE THING! I again have to say I LOVE HER SPUNK! EXCEPTIONALLY DONE Winter!

Well DAMN IT TO HELL-nothing is working out for her is it? Poor girl! I have to say I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE HER SPUNKINESS-a girl after my own heart!

WOW!-WOW! SUSPENSE, INTENSE and DOWN RIGHT BREATH TAKING FROM THE VERY BEGINNING Winter-DIED AND GONE TO HEAVEN and it was only the Prologue!

I'm a little pissed that its not technically finished. But I totally understand. And you left it at a really good point, because it's sweet and sappy ad technically could be considered the end until a new book or something. So props. Damn.

OH MY GOD NOOOOOO! I need to finish reading this story! WHERE IS IT? AHHHH! And the worst part is I cant buy it! AHHHH! x2!

On a more saner note, this was beautifully written. A good pace, smouldering characters and yummy sexual tension. And its awesome that ur work is getting published because you super deserve it!

All over the place, needs to slow down.

Hi, lovely. This is Melissa from A Drop of Romeo. Your story has been added to our site under the Supernatural/Fantasy section. Congrats! Here's your review:

Melissa Thinks: When Jaime's parents and the rest of their pack die in a tragic fire, she is completely shocked to find out that in order to protect her they made a deal with another pack: their alpha would get Jaime if they spared her life. On her eighteenth birthday they'll be back for her. Of course, Jaime runs from state to state, trying to find a way to get rid of this sexy yet controlling alpha. It's a game of cat and mouse and neither seem to want to give in.

So much lust in this story! At first I thought it would be tedious, but no! It really isn't one of those "love at first sight" stories. There is a decent amount of hate/love involved between Jaime and Sirus (on her part mostly, I think), making the moments they share together special and passionate. The chase sequences kept it exciting, keeping me highly entertained the whole story (although it is a short read). Winterland has crafted flawed characters, her story woven with incredible detail and action sequences. Escapes, chases, werewolves, rivalries, mystery, and desire; the key elements to this story that surely everyone can appreciate.

Its cool I get it unfortunately I can't continue to read it because well that would mean telling my parents that I read stuff like this which would ultimately lead to at least a month of grounding plus restricted Internet access and of coarse death