|Reviews for longing|
| FixitfelixJRJRJR chapter 1 . 7/14/2012
Hmmm... At first I thought it was starts, then I thought maybe just looking at the sky or up, and now I have no idea... A puzzle...
| Kalista Jia chapter 1 . 2/22/2010
Man, I must say I get really pulled in by reading the summary. Kya I can't seem to guess that "object" (such a cool assignment envyrawr!)
I was thinking of a baseball...
Ah the answer is bugging me you gotta tell me or I will go bazooka over it the whole night!
Nice description. I like your poem, there are short and bang! interesting stuff! yay _
| my own rebel angel chapter 1 . 6/16/2009
wow. that was really interesting. keep up the awsesomeness...:D - ps, im reading everything else too.
| fictionalboyfriend chapter 1 . 6/2/2009
It seems...dizzy. Giddy, even.
A bench? A picnic table?
| young and the reckless chapter 1 . 5/30/2009
i love the description and imagery,
and the abruptness of the ending :)