Reviews for longing
FixitfelixJRJRJR chapter 1 . 7/14/2012
Hmmm... At first I thought it was starts, then I thought maybe just looking at the sky or up, and now I have no idea... A puzzle...
Kalista Jia chapter 1 . 2/22/2010
Man, I must say I get really pulled in by reading the summary. Kya I can't seem to guess that "object" (such a cool assignment envyrawr!)

I was thinking of a baseball...

Ah the answer is bugging me you gotta tell me or I will go bazooka over it the whole night!

Nice description. I like your poem, there are short and bang! interesting stuff! yay _

Kalista Jia
my own rebel angel chapter 1 . 6/16/2009
wow. that was really interesting. keep up the awsesomeness...:D - ps, im reading everything else too.
fictionalboyfriend chapter 1 . 6/2/2009
It seems...dizzy. Giddy, even.

A bench? A picnic table?
young and the reckless chapter 1 . 5/30/2009
i love the description and imagery,

and the abruptness of the ending :)