Reviews for De Profundis Take Two
Isca chapter 1 . 5/31/2009
out of the depths

"Molten bower." Stunning word choice. A star with a fire-arch. How regal.

I love that you took the idea of 'de profunis' and made it your own-it's not about coming out of the depths of woe or sorrow, it's about striving to shine in a world that longs to suffocate your beauty. Excellent message. :D
Ernest Bloom chapter 1 . 5/31/2009
this is almost one of those

ecstatic, explosive pieces,

almost something a romantic

poet might have penned, with

certain blood vessels shot

through with an inkier

thallus of poison. Oh,

why not say what star on

THE FAR horizon looms?

'bloom' is always a good

word to use.