Reviews for my eyes were closed
poizenSkY chapter 1 . 5/31/2009
Quite and amzingly beautiful. It has that simplicity, yet it's so deep and unique from enyone elses. Very nice poem.) I really mean it, keep it up!
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 5/31/2009
Throughout the whole piece you hint at a getting a better look at someone. Then at the end you close it perfectly, with the idea of seeing everything.

It was really a strong comparision, and there was a clear change in the narrators perspective. Great job, keep up the good work.

Much love,