I enjoyed these two chapters so much. I really came to like Landon and all the sexual tension among the three friends. Oh, Carson probably has it bad for Landon... I would love to see you continue with this story one day.

Oops. I did not know that there were other chapters to this story... um, you could ignore half of my other comment about more of this story because you already did. *nervous laugh* Well... you still have my support! WOOT! -

YEAH! Finish that!... please. And *trumpet plays* Error Report! I think that there is another my head that shouldn't be there: "I turned my head my head to get a look at the man when the hand that was covering my mouth shot up and to cover my eyes." Plus I liked it too, it really should be finished. - You have my support!

NOO! UPDATE SOON! I want to know who the guy is that Landon slept with...

no please update? please please please? i love this story. plus u dont update claws that bind me often please?

Ohmygoshh, i think this is my favourite story on FP. :D The plot is great and it's written really well(: Pleasee update son! :3

Oh shit! I hope Landon will be okay! UPDATE SOON.

I like it. Is Carson the mysterious guy? I think it is. It makes sense given how mad he is.

ok ok u need to update soon ii mean soon this is awesome! at first i thought that carson was the one to have sex with him but i guess i was wrong. can't wait to see what happens next.

I really like this so far- very dramatic, without being too over the top. Can't wait to read more!

What do I think? I think I need to see chapter 3 and SOON! What will Landon do now?

wow landon totally blew his cover. i would have said "of course i said that! he and a chick were in my room! plus how could you possibly heard that with all the loud music?" also if he said that carson wouldn't be able to respond because it would blow his cover

please please continue. i want to read about john try and figure out why landon cant look at him in the going to be funny. please continue

Please do continue.

I wonder who that mysterious guy is . . .

I really like the characters and the setting. The beginning of this was a great start, it really set the story up well. I was a little disappointed by how rushed it felt, though, and that more emphasis was put on the sex instead of developing the characters a little more first. The end also turned into more of a cliche with the line, "Well shit... I guess I'm gay... and like one of my best friends. My very straight best friend." If it'd been developed more first instead of just jumping right to the sex, then I think that cliche would've worked. As it is, though, I don't think it works as well. I'd really like to see a revised version of this, though, because like I said the beginning really sets the readers up for a great story.