Reviews for Burned
ADAFwehoijfrnjAaDfd GAD chapter 1 . 6/2/2009
pretty good. I liked it.
tangledwebweweave chapter 1 . 6/1/2009
very nice. raw and emotionful. i can completely agree, one-hundred percent. i like the connection with the bracelet, it's unique to do that.

some of the lines seem a bit too long, but that's okay.

love your writing style.

keep it up. :)

favorite line: "There's an ache in my heart,"
I'll Break Your Heart chapter 1 . 6/1/2009
This is deep. I really really like this. oh my gosh. If this is like based off real life I hope you work it out. :)
LadyReaderofBooks chapter 1 . 5/31/2009
I really like this.
Invalid Account chapter 1 . 5/31/2009
Is Time capitalized for a reason? What is it meant to symbolize?

Anyway, I like your poem, its got a sad sort of reminiscent vibe to it. I usually don't read poetry, but I have to admit the title caught my attention. Nice job.
exsibilation chapter 1 . 5/31/2009
Wow...that was really good. It totally relates to what I'm going through right now...more so than my poetry. Keep up the good work.