I loved this. Although it did transition from helpless and hopeless to slasher pretty fast.

:D

This is good, a universe wide hunger games. I really like the idea, and you did a good job writing it. My only advice is to make sure you are consistent. In a previous chapter you had said the main characters shirt was white, but in this chapter you said it was grey. Just be careful about things like that.

Interesting. I like it keep it up. :3