i liked this chapter.

I have been waiting a long time for it

Update. Please.

Don't worry about it! I think it came out awesome. :) It is realistic and wasn't contrived in anyway at all! I love it!

:)

Hades is mine.

No, but really. They are so adorable together. Hades and Seph together forever.

So glad you updated, this is a interesting turn of events, as seeing Hades never apologized to her in the original myth.

I am so glad you updated this story. I love this story, all the characters and their own dealings with their life. I even feel sorry for Hades. At last he doesn't sound like the other gods and her mother, well, I don't know about the mother. I really am glad you updated this story and can't wait for another update to see how things work out. Thanks, again, for the update.

Love this story. Do you have an update schedule?

this was once again a very good chapter. you are a very talented writer.

poor persephone. not knowing about periods and water, but she's definitely very innocent.

have you heard of the poem 'Nothing Gold can Stay'? well, persephone is still golden, then with her innocence and purity. except for what she and Hades have been doing...

very nice

YES I LOVED IT

Don't be deterred by the people that talk about the inaccuracies or whatever. You should just say "This is my story and I write it how I want it." I love it, btw.

Even though she is crazily overprotective, I thought she she had an okay relationship with Hades...Unlike many of the other stories, hopefully she won't go berserk. :)

i love this story. you're doing a great job

glad to read this new chapter!

I can't wait to see how Hades will make things right.

I started reading this story this afternoon and have read it nonstop for several hours, finally ready for Cpt 19. I love this story and can't seem to put it down. The descriptions and story line is great. I hope by the time I get to the last chapter you have updated it again. I do feel sorry for Hades, he is trying so hard, she is fighting it so hard, who is going to win? Keep up with the updates!

Hey, I love the story of Hades and Persephone and this version is well written but, it's not exciting at all. There's no climbing tension or excitement, surely there should've been at least a small climax after all that's happened already? It doesn't pull me in. I'm sorry if this came off as mean, but I figured if you'd want to know if there were ways you could make your work more fun to read. )

The world is literally dying and Zeus is still trying to get some, wow! I really liked how you brought Rhea into the story, because a lot of versions of the myth don't mention her role in this debacle. I can't wait to see how Hades will handle the Lethe situation, and the reasoning behind Persephone's decision to go there.