I finally caught up with your story, and I wanted to let you know that I am loving it. I like the parallels of Persephone starving herself because she is not ready to fully submit to Zeus to Demeter's starving the world's people because she wants Zeus and Hades to give her child back to her.

Wonderful I hope this gets published

Oh YAY! I love the part Artemis has to play in this chapter! She's my favourite Olympian. :)

I really like how Demeter's anger extends into Poseidon's realm, it's a definite sign of her anger! All the gods and goddesses are panicking, I love it:)

Great chapter all around!

Why are they not supposed to eat the food of the dead? I've been wanting know for so long. SOMEONE PLEASE TELL ME!

I love this story. From the first few words to the last, I've been hooked! I cannot wait to read the published version!

beautiful, unique, with excellent character development but no side plot

what can I say but good luck (and patience!) on your way to getting your novel published! and don't give up, no matter what! I want to see DBH on a bookshelf in he near future!

OMG. It's going to be published! :) I think I might have to but it.

Aww... Glad to see they've resolved some things! :)

I hope Persephone will 'surrender' soon, that'd be sweet.

Hello. I just wanted to say that I love your story! It's inspired me to write my own HadesXPersephone story, and given me the idea to upload some of my own stories and poems I have written in the past. Thanks!

So Demeter turned the gardener into an insect? That's pretty cool, and once again shows that pissing off a goddess is bad! I bit sad that there's no kiddies in store for H &P, but that just gives them more time for each other:)

Awesome chapter, as always. :)