Reviews for Darkness Becomes Her
Melissa Brooks chapter 38 . 5/6/2010
I finally caught up with your story, and I wanted to let you know that I am loving it. I like the parallels of Persephone starving herself because she is not ready to fully submit to Zeus to Demeter's starving the world's people because she wants Zeus and Hades to give her child back to her.
AuthoressExtraordinaire chapter 1 . 5/6/2010
Wonderful I hope this gets published
Victoria chapter 38 . 5/2/2010
Oh YAY! I love the part Artemis has to play in this chapter! She's my favourite Olympian. :)
Typhaegia chapter 38 . 5/2/2010
I really like how Demeter's anger extends into Poseidon's realm, it's a definite sign of her anger! All the gods and goddesses are panicking, I love it:)
Jazz chapter 38 . 5/2/2010
Great chapter all around!
SkyLyte chapter 38 . 5/2/2010
Why are they not supposed to eat the food of the dead? I've been wanting know for so long. SOMEONE PLEASE TELL ME!
Bella Andrews chapter 37 . 4/16/2010
I love this story. From the first few words to the last, I've been hooked! I cannot wait to read the published version!
yarnspinner chapter 37 . 4/9/2010
beautiful, unique, with excellent character development but no side plot
M.Bianca chapter 37 . 4/4/2010
what can I say but good luck (and patience!) on your way to getting your novel published! and don't give up, no matter what! I want to see DBH on a bookshelf in he near future!
Eva Rieycoit chapter 37 . 4/3/2010
OMG. It's going to be published! :) I think I might have to but it.
Victoria chapter 36 . 4/1/2010
Aww... Glad to see they've resolved some things! :)
Jazz chapter 36 . 4/1/2010
I hope Persephone will 'surrender' soon, that'd be sweet.
AvidWriter-92 chapter 1 . 3/24/2010
Hello. I just wanted to say that I love your story! It's inspired me to write my own HadesXPersephone story, and given me the idea to upload some of my own stories and poems I have written in the past. Thanks!
Typhaegia chapter 35 . 3/23/2010
So Demeter turned the gardener into an insect? That's pretty cool, and once again shows that pissing off a goddess is bad! I bit sad that there's no kiddies in store for H &P, but that just gives them more time for each other:)
Victoria chapter 35 . 3/22/2010
Awesome chapter, as always. :)
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