Reviews for Darkness Becomes Her
Typhaegia chapter 16 . 8/27/2009
say yes Persephone! just say yes girl! hm...what would her mother say about this! This story is so good)
QuietInsanity chapter 16 . 8/26/2009
Simply wonderfull.

Cannot wait for the next one!
Jazz chapter 16 . 8/26/2009
If that were me I'd surrender. Ahh, sweet Persephone...
melancholya chapter 16 . 8/26/2009
Good gosh. Persephone is quite willful. I'm glad about that. It's fun watching Hades squirm and try to get her to eat, or other things...

Amazing story,

-jess
Jazz chapter 15 . 8/20/2009
First kiss. How exciting. :)
afdjklsfdjkeiojfskneio chapter 15 . 8/20/2009
Whoa.

I just read the entire story, and I am so impressed. If you ever publish this into a book, I'll buy it. Your word choice is phenomenal-it really grasps the story. I wasn't the hugest fan of Hades and Persephone, but now I love their love story.

I absolutely cannot wait for you to add more!

-jess
Typhaegia chapter 15 . 8/19/2009
hehee it keeps getting better!
QuietInsanity chapter 15 . 8/18/2009
Yay, Hades is making progress!
M. Forthe chapter 12 . 8/17/2009
Beautifully written! I love how at times you stick to the traditional mythology, yet at other times change it. It adds a clever twist of newness. Wonderful job!
Jazz chapter 14 . 8/16/2009
The bathtub sounded great. M.
QuietInsanity chapter 14 . 8/15/2009
Loved it!

Update soon!
Jazz chapter 13 . 8/10/2009
Whew! That was hot! Great job!
Typhaegia chapter 13 . 8/10/2009
simply amazing! I haven't read a story on this site as detailed & engrossing as this one!
QuietInsanity chapter 13 . 8/9/2009
Fantastic read!
Jazz chapter 12 . 8/5/2009
Oh wow, this chapter was AWESOME.
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