Um, I was too busy reading, so I couldn't get to comment. I think that Demeter is too possessive. I know that she's protecting her daughter, but she knows it's going to happen, anyway. So make it happen, right? I love this!

AWWWWWWWWWW the ending. I'll get your book when it comes out. I hope u leave the story up so that way i can come back to it. Also you should leave it up to put any info for ur actual book.

The prologue made the chapters confusing. I've only recently began this story, but here are a few typos. I've tried to list the accurate place I found them at.

Ch2 5th marker: static not statuc?

Ch2(3?) 5th marker 16th paragraph :wander not wonder

Ch2(3?) 6th marker :He 'waked' with his shoulders back.-walked

Ch2(3?) 6th marker 15th paragraph :been not berm?

That's all I could catch. This story is almost too long! But it is interesting enough that I may finish it... eventually. I actually prefer shorter stories on ficpress. This is like a novel. You've obviously put a lot of time into this. Look at all the reviews! Will you ever get to mine? Lol.

That was awesome! Honestly, after the wedding I never knew the story would have a final chapter. Man, but it's good to see the story ended well. I like that she had her own company - that was so cool.

About the title, I absolutely love Death's Spring; that's like an oxymoron. I love it.

Thank you for dedicating your time to this EPIC story. I look forward to you continuing the rest, especially Worthy of Love (this story rocks my world).

You should check out for more awesome readers and constructive criticism. I seriously recommend it.

Congratulations on being on the Fiction List at Project Fiction.

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Amazing story. Thank you so much, and good luck with the publishing process!

I absolutely loved this story ! I always love the Hades and Persephone story, but your version has to be my all time favourite !

A great way to finish the story i especially like the idea of the modern company in enna and persephone following the family, it was well worth the wait.

This has been an incredible story!

Hallowedlady here!

Just thought I would say that the prologue for your story is excellent and I'll be reading more of it!

I love this story, you describe everything so well its as if you were there. This story is very well structured and with all the detail you would think that it would be boring. Great work!

AW! Is that the end or are you going to do a epilogue for the story or something because I think that the rest of yur fans will love for that to happen :)

Love this story and update (and Yeah! the "scene") Darkness Becomes Her - the book - by Kelly Keaton I saw it at Wal-Mart and took the time to thumb through it. It is also greek mythology but it didn't appear to be as good as yours. Needless to say, I didn't buy it. I will hate to see this story end. Thanks for the great and sexy update and update again when you can. You have a great talent for writing.

Yes! that was awesome!

Aw they're adorable! I love the ending scene!

Hi, been reading for awhile, and really love this. I actually just read the new "Darkness Becomes Her" (aka, the one that stole your title) and ironically, it involves the Greek Gods. It's a modernized version (sort of kind of) of the Medusa story. (Your story is also better).

ANYWAYS, I have a sort of suggestion for a title. A play I just helped direct for school had the line, "But from the heart of darkness comes the light." It reminded me of Persephone for some reason. Obviously, it's a bit long to be a title, but I think if it could be somehow cut down it would make a good title.

Much luck and wished inspiration!