Ouranos's life drain felt painful to read!

Great prologue, I like how you have shown Hades usually when one thinks of Hades they think of the greedy man who would betray anyone just to get more power

LOVING the story so far!

Yours is the 1st story I've read on here. I was thrilled to find that there's a whole mythology section! & even more thrilled to so quickly find someone else whom was interested in using this site to refine there work n2 novels. But, enough idle chatter. I'll tell you about your story, now. I already adore your take on Hades! You make him less cruel and more tragic. Sorta the peaceful, antisocial kid who is that way because he's so bothered by the loud immature ones.

Bravo on a great chapter!

Hello,

I just stumbled onto this story and am very impressed. I have done a lot of research on greek mythology (I had a 20 page paper over it in high school) and like the way you are telling it.

Let me know if you are going to keep updating. I would love to keep reviewing.

I'm really enjoying this! Usually just troll FP for mindless things to pass the time, but enjoyed your story enough that I had to find it again after having to leave the first computer in the middle of it, and then create an account to keep track of it. Keep it up! You really capture the personalities of the characters very well, keeping the traditional stories and myths while making it very uniquely your own.

I am loving the detail and care with which you are handling this story, taking the time to delicately set everything into place. It is so refreshing after reading story after story where we are rushed into the main plot. I feel you are giving the characters more depth, and the story more intrigue. Will definitely be watching for updates. I cannot wait to see where this story will take me.

You are a great writer, I really enjoy this story! I can't wait for the next chapter when Hades and Kora meet!

Very good chapter. It's nice to have this insight into Persephone's future.

I had figured that Persephone would be a demigoddess (since it seemed that Iasion was her father) I'm sure Demeter will find a really good way to have her revenge :D

What my name says - kudos on a grest story so far. I really enjoyed the cameo of Danae (that WAS her, right?) in this story. I also like how you have the gods to be powerful, but not infinitely so, so Demeter was tired from her fight and needed to replenish her energy, very realistic.