Reviews for Darkness Becomes Her |
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![]() ![]() LOL so hard at the fight between Seph and Zeus. Old bastard deserved it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() never really liked Zeus, you know? feel free to beat him up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() loved it! very nice work |
![]() ![]() ![]() Doesn't Persephone want to go with Hades though? Love love this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow! I thought Demeter would've made a scene. I guess she will when Hades appears |
![]() ![]() Aw... I love the last line at the end of the chapter. "He was lonely" is a very succinct way of explaining Hades' actions! I also love her new friendship with Artemis! She's my favourite goddess! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story and I also want some H/P action. They belong together! You are very talented and the way you have written this story for so many chapters is amazing. Keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() good chapter |
![]() ![]() Really enjoyable chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story . Can't wait 4 some H/P action though!:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow - Words cannot describe how much I enjoyed your novel. I do like your writing style and think it perfect for the subject you've written about, and was especially fond of the dialogue. You've nailed it on the head. :) I've always been fond of mythology, Greek in particular, and feel you've done an excellent job in portraying the characters as well as the various myths you've included in your work. I do hope to see this published one day! I might include that I read the dirty bits on AFFN, and they made me blush - not a lot can do that! Very well written and VERY descriptive! ;) I also applaud your ability of having kept this story going as long as you have. I noticed that it was published on the site back in 2009, and was very impressed you've stayed with it. I find I lose interest in most of my stories when a new, shiny idea comes along, and just the fact that you've kept with this for nearly 50 chapters and well over 200k words is very respectable to me. :) Loved it - keep up the great work. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just got to chapter 48, and I really, really hope you publish more because this story is so fantastic! I love that you kept it to true myths, instead of just using the gods/goddesses names for whatever you wanted. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it :) |
![]() ![]() tanks so much! |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg, this is incredible. spell-binding. i couldn't stop reading! |