Reviews for Darkness Becomes Her |
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![]() ![]() ![]() thank you so much for this great Christmas present! merry Christmas to you, too! |
![]() ![]() Merry Christmas to you too. Awesome update. Loved the last line especially. |
![]() ![]() Interesting chapter as always! Happy Christmas! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for the update Christmas present. Love this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() good work! i can't wait to read the rest of the story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE THIS STORY |
![]() ![]() ![]() I thought that Sarpedon died during the Trojen war - Patroclus kills him in the iliad and zeus morns for him; so how can he already be dead? sorry, I know this isn't relevant, i'm just curious |
![]() ![]() great story please continue! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm loving the direction this story is taking! I really do hope you get it published:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() ngaw they miss each other! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gosh, i love this story. Can't wait until they are reunited. :) Update soon! Please! |
![]() ![]() Love the regular update schedule, and great chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved this new chapter. Please let Hades and Persephone get together. You have developed these two characters so well they just seem like they need to be together. I'm glad (sort of) that Persephone and Demeter seem to be working things out-but I wonder what will happen when Demeter realizes Persephone is lonely without Hades and her returning to him? Very good update-loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() loved it :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whoo-Hoo! I liked this chapter so much! I'm glad Demeter is getting payback and I'm glad Persephone is holding her own. You have developed her character into a very mature thinking young woman who thought about all the devastation/death her mother had caused and have shown what a selfish mother can do to fail at a mother/daughter relationship. I'm glad to see the character development of Hades as well as he has helped develop Persephone into an intelligent young woman. Very good story. I am anxiously waiting for another update. I do hope Hades and Persephone get back together again. He is so good for her in developing her character. Love this story! |