Reviews for Light of the Beautiful Wings
MockingJuliet chapter 1 . 6/6/2009
Nicely written. This poem flows rather well. Im impressed. I rarely come across poems quite so beautiful as this. You obviously have talent. Nice job. When reviewing poems, I usually like to pick out my favorite lines, or at least what i think is the best, but gosh, I just cant decide on this one. Its all beautiful.
ForeverBehindTheImpression chapter 1 . 6/5/2009
"Scared for the future,

Scarred from the past,

breathing in the now,

but tomorrow is unsure."

Beautiful lines! This poem was really REALLY good! One of your best, and my favs from you!