|Reviews for Hot Out of the Oven|
| Octello chapter 1 . 8/26/2009
Ah, I know this feeling, and you capture it very well.
(Hate to be annoying, but you use "potent" twice within two lines and it was a little bit like, "wait... didn't I just see that word?" But other than that, I loved the ending line and the rest of the poem.)