Reviews for Black Rainbows |
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![]() ![]() In all seriousness, I do hope the author is...alright. It's a shame the story hasn't but updated in years but it always disconcerts me when nothing is heard from the author in ages with no note indicating the reason for their absence. That's just me being pessimistic though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey I know you probably forgot about this or whatever but if you could please try to update or post a summary or something, I think all your readers will greatly appreciate it. I know I'm being an insensitive jackass but I'm hooked to your story. This is my fifth time reading it in a span of two months and I just need to know what happens next. Honestly, great job! Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() PLEASE UPDATE... SO GOOOOOOODDDDD... CAN'T STOP |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your so awesome. Take time to write this. We are all busy in life. Please finish this! I didnt read this without expecting some action. |
![]() ![]() So I'm going tk start off by saying that your writing is not bad whatsoever. It flows nicely and Its easy to read and understand. What I do have a problem with is the use of gay/straight sterotypes that you continuously imply. For example, "Derek's penmanship was a smooth, very easy to read print, that reminded Daniel of a san serif font on a computer. It surprised him, a bit – he expected Derek's handwriting to be messy. But then again, Derek was bisexual". Are you saying that he only writes neat because he is gay. What I'm saying is, just because a person is gay does not mean they all act a certain way. Same goes for straight people. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG. I almost flipped my laptop when I saw there wasn't a 'Next Chapter' button. Looking SO VERY MUCH forward to your next update. *Favs & Follows* n |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awwwww. 33 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh shit! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh god, something happened to Daniel didn't it? DD: |
![]() ![]() ![]() Daniel loves food doesn't he? 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Luv dis! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is too goodd. :3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg, this is hot already. 33 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Noooooo, I need more! When is Derek going to find out about Daniel. Is the ex-girlfriend going to tell him or maybe it's the dad when they go there for thanksgiving. Or maybe Daniel is going to tell him... But somehow I don't see that happening! Can't wait for more : D |