Reviews for the rum is always gone, but you're not a pirate
Lizabellhanson05 chapter 1 . 6/16/2009
Been there. I have a strange obsession with P.O.C.:D
in the city of neon and chrome chapter 1 . 6/15/2009
not only was this really well written, but the title made me *SWOON* jack sparrow life. i had to point that out. P
fishsticks101 chapter 1 . 6/12/2009
I love the metophorical views. I like the part about throwing him overboard:)
stolen hugs chapter 1 . 6/3/2009
o, but jack sparrow is love. (:

as is this line: "because i love(d) you (once)" & "and from this angle, i can see just how small the

island of you really is - and to think, i was landlocked

there for years!"

brilliant job!
for shame chapter 1 . 6/3/2009
the title reminds me of i am a pirate, you are a princess - by playradioplay.

good band. (:

i love the ending.

as always, of course.
lymli chapter 1 . 6/3/2009
I like the verse 4, the whole poem is kinda sweet.