This story is really good. It drew me in considering I don't really read nephilim stories due to people being overzealous on religion. They make it more personal instead of general and mess up what is and what isn't. This story is well maintained.

When's the next chapter?

Love it cant wait for the rest

Gus makes a comment in one the chapters before that Kellan loves Shay more and something about "if they weren't siblings". That he is obsessed with her. But it comes to light later that both Gus and Vespar knows that Kellan isn't their real brother so the comment doesn't make that much sense, unless it slipped when Gus said it.

My only comment so far is how she goes from seeing him as a brother to someone who is NOT in a manner of a VERY short period of time. Like hours. Imagine living your whole life believing it to be true. Would your view change that quickly? I would've preferred it to happen over a longer period of time for it to be more believable.

Possibly the best thing I've ever read. Most stories are predictable to me, but this has surprised me a lot! Please please please update!

This story is so amazing ! I love kellan Awwww damn lovely demon,,,eh why not update? I hope if any day possible please update...

I cannot wait for the rest of the book and any following ones. Love the characters and their dynamics with each other and the world.

I cannot

More. Please!?

This is an awesome story! Very unique and suspenseful in its own way :) Although I couldn't finish it. It left me hanging in the middle of an rescue and escape mission. Does anybody know if she finished this book and if so, where can I buy it? I'm pretty desperate as it is. I have a Nook book, but I will take paperback if its available!

Shiiiiit! Just as I was getting really excited,the book aint finished! But all in all its really good,I felt as if I was Shay damnnnnn! Good job Tijan. No criticism from me!

You really need to update this! It's too good to just leave it as it!

I am really enjoying this so far! I loved getting a little romance between Kellen and Shay-so sad that they were interrupted! I love all of the action in the last few chapters! I can't wait to read more!

I really like this story and the mystery surrounding it. You are are very talented writer. I really do want to know what Shay is!