Well that cleared up a few questions. So demons, and not the garden variety either, should be interesting to see where this all leads and whats going on.

If I had any I'd offer some advice/constructiveness but as it is, you have an extremely good handle on what you are doing and I don't see any obvious way of improving on it.

A favorite line from a review I got on a story I had done a while ago, thats fits you as well I believe;

"You have suspense and tension flowing from your fingers into the keyboard and into the story."

And it works really well, leaving all of us wondering where the rabbit hole leads.

Once again, a masterpiece in the making. I should stop excepting less of you. I was wondering about the name Guiseppe. I dpn't know if it's in a different language but it's generally a common mis-spelling of an Italian name (Giuseppe) and it's only a name given to males. That is, in Italy. I was wondering if maybe you had gotten it somewhere else...?

I'll await your update...

Keep Writing,

xxTunstall Chickxx

There's a lot of mystery surrounding this story. It hasn't drawn me in instantly like some of your other stories, but it'll probablly only take a few chapters before I get sucked in.

Generally speaking I think I prefer your supernatural stories than the normal ones, the plot's a lot more fun.

I look forward to future updates and hopefully an update to Davy's story ;D

Leila

exactly what are they? also i was confused in the first chapter by what she meant by they had no skin color? does that mean they're super pale?

Gah! More hints with no answers! You have an awesome way of doing that. It's frustrating as hell, but fun to read at the same time. Looking forward to chapter 3!

Noticed an error:

"Still…a part of wished things could’ve been different"

should probly be

"Still…a part of ME wished things could’ve been different"

HEY!

Loved this chappie just as much as the last one and can't wait for chapter three so post soon PLEZ!

I hopw you haven't been hit at all by the plagerism, i can't beileve people are actually doing tht!

How pathetic!

Have a good week!

Hope you post soon!

BYE!

x x x

New story ey? Looks okay, but seems like a bit of a lame start (that sounded harsh but it wasnt meant to be) Your a great writer though, so it'll turn out good - duh!

Update soon :)

Quite an interesting start to your story. All your stories quickly hook readers, actually. You've also done a great job of introducing enough info on Shay's family to keep us un-confused and still intrigued. I'm quite curious about the relationship between Shay and Kellan; I would say he's the romantic interest, but there's that whole sibling thing in the way. But, if they're not human, they might not even have qualms about incest. Hm. Looking forward to next chapter!

again. I love this story!

Hmm...what are they? I'm very curious. Great chapter, and thank you for the quick update!

New chapter !

Love your writing and am super excited to see what happens with Shay :)

Hope to see more soon.

howdy! so i had thought that Gus (can't spell her whole name without going back to the story) was a guy. i thought she was the only girl in the family besides her mom. i can't help but think there's something going on with kellan and shay, more than sibling relationship. i could be wrong. what are they? i don't think they are vampires - unless vampires in this story can walk in daylight. alright, will be waiting for the next chapter. i hope it explains more of who they are... more so what they are.

hmm this is so interesting!

on one hand i really really wana see her power

and on the other, i kinda jst want to know whats going on

wait. thats not a debate

lol. yeah i just wana know moree!

thanks for the update!

just read the first chapter this afternoon and when I opened the computer tonight, the second chapter was up! thanks for the quick update!

this story reminds me of jaded. the 2 main characters, shay and kellan, remind me of bryce and sheldon, with the exception that shay and kellan have powers haha. I really can't wait to find out who Shay ends up with in the story.

I like how the first chapter makes them all seem like normal teens, and the second chapter reveals that they aren't while not yet saying how they are different. It makes me excited to read the rest of the story and see how you plan to unravel just how special or supernatural they all are.

Do you think you could mention in the story, the ages of the Bradens? it would be nice to know how much older Kellan is, or the ages of the various people in the story.

thanks again for the quick update. I'm already excited for the next one! :)

hmm...i wonder what they are?

are Kellan n Shay really brother n sister?...doesn't feel like it.

can't wait for more!