Reviews for Evil
Damned to heaven chapter 2 . 6/6/2009
Why oh why do you have to write so bloody brilliantly? This is beautiful. I know Kellan is Shay's brother but for some reason them as a couple seems very interesting. Incestuous i know but hey i like him and i like her so yeah them as a couple i find not so bad. This is intriguing as is Shay.
KelaBelle chapter 2 . 6/6/2009
Loves it Tottaly fabulous x
silentsound chapter 2 . 6/6/2009
absolutely brillant, as usual. I cant wait to see how you progress these characters throughout the story. In general, you are equally character and plot driven which is nice to see. I know your writing style is to be a bit more elusive, and let the reader dream up whatever is going on, but my only suggestion is to add slightly more description. If not of surrounding then of feeling, of the characters emotions. But, you are an amazing author and I cannot wait to see where you take this beautiful beginning.
chng234 chapter 2 . 6/5/2009
wat r they? i believe they have super strength. how many siblings do shay has?
clear vision chapter 2 . 6/5/2009
oh shit, i hadn't realized this was supernatural! hahaha, i usually don't read supernatural but this is so interesting! (: good work!
Ravina chapter 2 . 6/5/2009
I'm liking the mystery...can't wait for more!

- Rebekah
Night's-Freedom chapter 1 . 6/5/2009

WOW! This story is so incredible! I love it!

PLEASE post another chappie soon. I'm hooked already!

Have a good week!


x x x
Rosey-Blue chapter 1 . 6/5/2009

your stories are the best!

good beginning.

Intriguing and mysterious a great combination.
apocalypse09 chapter 1 . 6/5/2009
i love your stories and have been following them forever.

This is a fantastic beginning. Interesting choice in names for the family.

I can't wait to read more so please update as soon as you can!

kore-reborn chapter 1 . 6/4/2009
I love it. I usually don't find many supernatural/romance stories on FictionPress that I like but this one sounds really intriguing.

I can't wait for the next chapters to see where the story is going to go.
xxjoceyuxx chapter 1 . 6/4/2009
Love it! update soon :)
Kaspian chapter 1 . 6/4/2009
Sounds exciting:)
Jevanminx chapter 1 . 6/4/2009
Well this is certainly interesting and mysterious. I can't wait to read more.

Crentania chapter 1 . 6/4/2009
Ooh! I like the intro so far - it does very well at reeling me in. It's going on alerts! Woot!
sgwx chapter 1 . 6/4/2009
I love your writing! Been following you for so long, and it's amazing to see how your writing's progressed :) Thanks for a new story~ This seems like it might have potential to be my favorite... but then again, I love all of your works!
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