|Reviews for Evil|
| artificial destiny chapter 1 . 6/3/2009
captivating first chapter
looking forward to the rest :D
| CoryD chapter 1 . 6/3/2009
| icey91 chapter 1 . 6/3/2009
Yay! you make me so happy :D you've started another story!
| Ravina chapter 1 . 6/3/2009
You have a way of pulling people into your stories and making them beg for me.
So this is me begging for you to update soon...please?
But to be more specific, I like the power you've shown in Shay, Kellen, and their siblings. I also like that you've given Shay a love for art, because it shows another side to her - I think.
And I can picture the paintings of demons the guy drew because you describing them chillingly. Shay's reaction almost made me shiver.
I'm not sure about the summary though, because it's very vague.
Again: Update? :)
| Blackrain7557 chapter 1 . 6/3/2009
Great start to what looks to be an intense story. You created a first chapter that at the same time gives us very little and quite a bit of information, and it works very well. Looking forward to the update and continuation of the story.
| BreeJalil chapter 1 . 6/3/2009
Looks really promising so far, I'm interested to see what's going to happen and to learn more about this family.
Keep up the great work.