I was a little unsure about reading this story since it was rated "M," but after reading this first chapter I have changed my mind (and a lot of other people said I need to read your stuff). I really enjoyed what I read and I can't wait to read future chapters! Nice work!

oOoOo this is good! it need an update... i'm worried you have writers block and won't continue on this. BUT YOU HAVE TO! it would unfair that you don't continue what you've already started. I don't mean to be rude but i think you're getting carried away with yourself and starting all this books and ideas but you don't finish them or the series. I like your ideas but i think you should stay focused on the ones you've already started. This is a good story line and its a bitch that you just stopped when it got sooooooo good :P

Wow ,This story is just awesome I loved reading it an I really hope that you keep writing this an that kellan and shay get a happy ending .i definetly didn't see this story turnin out the way it did I cannot believe She is half angle and he's half demon and there soul mates that's just do conflicting to live who you were born to hate and yet thy do it . I also hope Gus and vespar are in the story more and they develop into the plot too .

omg! PLEASE UPDATE!

Holy crap, how have I not stumbled on this before!

Love it! Yes, there are some words that are in the wrong order, but I know it's not edited and not typical of your writing. so I'll forgive you :)

I love Shay's character; she's very believable, considering she's a supernatural character. Gus's naivety irks me greatly, but I dont' mean that as a criticism; I can just tell that she has the sort of personality that I would clash with if we ever met!

Can't wait for the next chapter :)

Mish xx

so when is her dad gonna come?

OMG A NEW CHAPTER! 3 Loved it! Exciting as usual...although I must admit that I sort of forgot (at first but I remembered by the end) who Matt and Dylan were. Anyway, I hope you update some more soon! :)

OOOOOOO! I'm so excited for the next chapter! the house you've envisioned is amazing! God i wish i had a house like that. I love Kellan's character, and Damien's! Write write write write!

This is a good story. I've read your work before and I love that you write out your stories and dont just jump to all the big parts. You drag in a reader by grabbing their attention and you keep them hooked. Awesome job. Can't wait for the next update.

interesting story can't wait for the next chapter

So, there's something I've been wondering about now that I sat down and read all the chapters in one go. The concept of soulmates between the human parts of Kellan and Shay keeps on getting brought up, but I still don't understand why it's so powerful and why it almost seems supernatural. Does it have something to do with their being hybrids? Or do all humans have soul mates in this story (like the students from their former high school)?

Can't wait to read more and I'm really glad I gave this story a try ]

There's so much to comment on but I'm short on time so I'm going to stick with my favourite part:

THE HOUSE!

Haha...so the description was so awesome that I feel like calling up an architect and having one built NOW with the exact same specs.

Yeah yeah, don't look at me funny...

- Rebekah

Ooh an update already? Ah, I love you so much!

Wondering how everyone and everything will play into the story.. I love how you can keep a reader's interest and curiosity piqued :) again, thanks for the update!

Just read all 17 chapters in one go and I'm addicted to this story now.

I can't wait for find out for what Damien has to say... don't keep us hanging too long!

I'm look forward tot he next chapter :)

That was pretty darn good for this chapter not being edited. I wonder what news Shay would need to hear... Awesome fight scene. This story is just so draws you in and hooks it's claws into you and doesn't let go.