wow!

this is so cool!

please please please update soon?

I find this story very interesting. I really hope you find time to finish it, because I would like to know what happens. I also like the main characters.

This story is so interesting! Its such a shame you dont seem to be updating it at all. Would love to see how it all plays out :) (Also, don't know if its intended or im just a sicko, but im getting some seriously hot vibes between Kellen and Shay *fans self* :P)

What? You haven't updated this in forever! You should totally work on this one after Brady is done!

Very interesting! I want more. Update soon please!

Oh. My. GOD.

I LOVE the intensity and secretiveness in this story! BRILLIANT! Update soon! I can't wait!

Love the characters, Kellan and Shay are extremely powerful personalities. Their beliefs are like Black and White. It's intriguing.

Would love to see where you take this D

my so excited to read this story...and find out the truth between this weird family. Please update soon. Thanks :)

Dear Tijan,

There are exactly three authors which I follow on fictionpress. Usually I only read already completed stories so as not to be let down when I hit the end and they are not undated. But for these three authors they are the first thing I look up when I click onto fictionpress in the hopes that they have updated. You are, of course, one of these three. I think you are a terrific author. AWNC was one of the first stories I read upon finding this site and I was blown away. It was so complex while well developed and thought out, surpassing my experiences with many published books which come across much more juvenile. It's also impressive that you can juggle more than one book at a time in terms of writing and editing. I just felt it was finally time I said something. (I think before you couldn't review unless you are a member- which I am not).

I do also hope you won't give up on this (Evil) story. I am intrigued by the characters and the story line and would like to see where it goes.

Keep up the good work.

Best,

Your Faithful Reader

I would like you to know that I await for this story to be updated with great patience. I can truly say that this story is amazing. I regret that I spent this past year waiting for you to update "A Whole New Crowd" as I missed the fact that you were creating masterpieces like this.

I believe that people like you, great authors who strive for perfection, encourage not only the people around you, but the people who are fortunate enough to read a story like this. When I read great stories like this I see so many things. In this time where classical things like art, and writings are cast aside and given less value than they used to, it's great to see such a great sense of lyrical direction. Even in such a digital time.

I usually don't write a review for a story because I have good enough memory that I can keep up with it even if it doesn't get updated for a few years, but this story has forced my hand.

You are amazing, this story, all of your stories are amazing. I don't know you very well and if this is something you don't want to hear, because you think (this is an assumption) that there is always room to improve, I apologize. But this is the truth.

When a story like this is written, it not only gives birth to new inspiration in other people, it helps improve how they write. Helps motivate them to write. It's amazing, what one story can do.

After reading this you can almost guarantee that I will definitely read this a few times more. Not only that but any other story that you have, and will, write.

Until next time,

雨雅師太 ― Amegashita

Oh, my glorious lord… This story is incredible.

I’m extremely amazed by this, for many reasons. I am an obsessive reader, and have found many great stories on FP, but Evil has something than defines it and takes it to another level of greatness: passion.

I can feel the passion, demonic or heavenly, throughout the narration, the characters and the dialogue. The questions are ever present, and the answers bring a thirst for more. I know it only has four chapters, and the plot hasn’t reached a climax point yet, but the possibilities for this story are unimaginable and incredible. Strong, but delicate; reveling, but mysterious and so powerful and dominant– the Braden’s are a family I want to get to know closely.

While I know that you’re a fan of editing, and won’t be satisfied with this story until is as perfect as it can be, I had to review it now to expose a single reality: I will be waiting for this story to be told, because it deserves – and needs – to be read. So, please, continue with it and kudos for creating in four chapters a story I will most likely start to read again just as soon as I’m done with this review.

Haha my name is shay!

awsommee storiee.* )

please continue

The four siblings are interesting together, especially Shay and Kellan. It's a bit of a copout to make G and V twins because that's so overdone, unless there's some sort of cool backstory between them having to do with their demon origin.

Would like to see more of a plotline because so far they've.. gone to high school. Hopefully Matt Rettley and his grudge comes back into play to see how far Kellan will go to protect Shay.

Hope you aren't offended by my comments, just wanted to give you my two cents :)

this story is so good! please update soon! The plot is so interesting

wow! wow! wow! this story and it's deep intriguing characters have me addicted! I can't wait for more, the hidden meanings and suspense have me hooked!