Reviews for Evil
Duuude chapter 4 . 6/25/2009

This is awesome.

You're so fricken talented. I don't get how you do it. Every story you write has some crazy beginning that pulls everyone in and then it gets better and better.

Great main character as always. Always original. )

I wish you'd update this. Even more than Brady Remington Landed Me In Jail and I love that story.

Update soon please.
Kimber chapter 4 . 6/21/2009
This story is just getting good! Please don't stop now! I hope you update soon. I love all your stories. Your writing is just awesome!
shakrya chapter 4 . 6/15/2009
This probably has to be one of the most intense stories I've ever read! Good job, I can't wait to see how the dynamics of the siblings change!
muzikall chapter 4 . 6/15/2009
This story is very well-written! least now I know WHAT they are, but I still don't know what being descended from a demon means...

Please update soon!
JustanotherReviewer chapter 1 . 6/14/2009
I'm hooked. I love the intensity of this story and I look forward to your next update.

Writer's Inspiration chapter 4 . 6/13/2009
Nicely written, strong characters.

It seems like it will be a very nice plot .

Shay seems to be a little different the the others can't wait to find out why.

Nice to find out that the lead female seems to be stronger then the lead male most authors can't pull this off correctly.

Over all this seems to be starting off nicely.

Work on grammar though.
Ciss chapter 4 . 6/12/2009
OMG, this story is so GOD! I hope there is something hot between Kellan and Shay ;) update soon please! You are the best.
lostlette chapter 4 . 6/12/2009
I love this story!
Arydesia chapter 4 . 6/12/2009
i'm hooked so far ;) strong characters and suspenseful writing.

i wonder if Shay isn't really related to the other two...completely different looks, personality. i really hope so, actually, because it seems like there's this romantic edge to Kellan and Shay's relationship-and i'm not a fan of incest.

i liked the Braden debate in this chapter, but Vesper's words at the end didn't work for me. it seems like you're trying to fit in Shay's dramatic last line, but it was set awkwardly. Vesper is a sophomore, younger than Shay, yet he comments about her being only a high school girl. also, the remark isn't really one that would cause everyone to gasp in shock-it's not particularly witty, biting, or challenging. Sorry if I sound picky about it-it just doesn't seem like a strong enough lead-in for Shay's statement about her being more than a high school girl.

waiting for the next chapter! 8D

TouchOfChaos chapter 4 . 6/11/2009
very intense.

update soon.
MZ PEACHESZZ chapter 1 . 6/11/2009
plus you have a penchant for giving interesting, unique, or very emphatic names for your male leads. Kellan...Brady Remington,etc
MZ PEACHESZZ chapter 4 . 6/11/2009
so I just read the first chapter (more like skimmed the first few paras) and I can already tell there's something between Kellan and Shay..yes? no? Incest doesn't rock my boat so hopefully the plot reveals other developments. Anyways, I'm going to wait until you make some headway into this story to start reading but looks good so far. Update soon!
Katie chapter 4 . 6/11/2009
very nice. I've been waiting for a while to find the time to read this thoroughly and review, but it's very very good.

yet again, lol.


thisfemme chapter 4 . 6/11/2009
I've been reading your stories for awhile and haven't ever review. I'm sorry about that. This story just pulled at me and made me want to review. I want to say these characters are one of your most interesting ones, although you have had many interesting ones if not all of them. Hopefully you'll be struck with inspiration soon and update quickly for us to see how this plays out. :)
xoxokristen chapter 4 . 6/10/2009
oh, great story! Are the Braden's all the same? did I miss their birth order? anyway, please update again soon!
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