Reviews for Evil
Lainiee chapter 4 . 6/9/2009
Confrontations are the bestt. I like Vespar, even though we never se him. I hope he's included in the story more haha. Love the updates and love youu for taking the time to write this for us readers. We really do appreciate it :)

Thank you!
RobotInTheHead chapter 4 . 6/9/2009
Hey!

This story is awesome! The whole supernatural vibe fits so well in it. You have been on a roll with updates lately! All your stories are amazing and you have some real talent! Keep the update coming!;P

Take care,

RtN
How.To.Be.Dead chapter 4 . 6/9/2009
At first when I started reading this I was confused. I am still a little confused but things are slowly making more and more sense. I am very curious to read how this story progresses. So far I would have to say I like Kellan the best even though he is still kind of a mystery.
xxjoceyuxx chapter 4 . 6/9/2009
amazing amazing amazing amazing! :)

Love the interaction between the siblings, it's always interesting
silentsound chapter 4 . 6/9/2009
way to be amazing. This story is progressin so great. I cannot wait for the next installment.
greyes chapter 4 . 6/9/2009
This is getting more and more interesting. The characters are developing, the plot is thickening, etc. And I have a million questions.

I want to know what Shay's tattoo is, and why its always burning. I want to know more about the Braden children, including where their parents are at the moment (if they still have parents). I want the know the specifics of their 'powers' and their lineage.

Long story short, this story is making me mad for answers. Which is a very, very good thing, in way of your writing.
Night's-Freedom chapter 4 . 6/9/2009
HEY!

Whoo, tht was awesome. Everyone loves a lil verbal sparing every now nd thn lol. Personally, I'd eat the cottage cheese first, thn u can mask the taste of it with a donut, plus u'll feel like it's a reward for eating the cheese :P Can't defy tht logic lol

Hope u can post a new chappie soone!

Have a gd week!

BYE!

x x x
xxjoceyuxx chapter 3 . 6/9/2009
Amazing! I love this story the suspense just adds to the curiosity I have. Can't wait to read the rest of it!
Kaspian chapter 3 . 6/9/2009
just keep going:)
x-porcelain-x chapter 1 . 6/9/2009
Hey :) I'm a long time reader but this is my first time reviewing one of your stories, sorry about that.

I'm liking this story and the character of Shay...she seems a much stronger heroine, in the way that she will not be pushed around, than the female leads in other stories that I've read recently so im liking her already ;)

The suspense in this story is amazing, i find myself wanting to find out more about Shay and the family. Especially Vespar who at the moment just has a giant question mark for a head for me :)

Even though you were ill, the last chapter was great. Can't wait to see the next chapter when you're better

x
Jevanminx chapter 3 . 6/9/2009
Oh our first viewing of what Shay is capable of, interesting.

JM
Crentania chapter 3 . 6/9/2009
Pretty darn good for bein sick! :D Glad to hear you're on a roll cuz I'm lovin this story. You're doing well at keeping us in the dark and only letting go what little information needed to keep the story moving while still interesting.
xxTunstall Chickxx chapter 3 . 6/9/2009
Demons, huh? Very nicely done. You're really giving out the idea of unbalance in her life. I wait the next one.

Keep Writing,

xxTunstall Chickxx
greyes chapter 1 . 6/9/2009
I'm really loving this so far! I feel that slowly but surely the real plot is revealing itself.

As for the main love interest, I'm another person who's not exactly sure what kind of relationship Kellan and Shay have. Then again, Shay is "different" from her family, which could mean morally but I'm also guessing that they aren't really related? She did say that she looked different from all of them, and had special powers, so...
readernotwriter1 chapter 3 . 6/9/2009
I was checking my email this morning for a file that I needed to print for school before I left the house, when I saw that you had an update! and I couldn't resist to read the story hahaa so I ended up leaving my house later than I should have cause i stopped to read this chapter!

kellan is such a cool sweet older brother! I love the mystery and suspense of the story that you're building up! you just leave me wanting more! oh and thanks for putting the ages or years of the bradens! its hard for me to believe that shay is actually older than gus and vespar because usually I imagine the youngest one or the oldest one to be the strongest.. i'm still waiting to read more about vespar! ah i'm so excited haha

thank you so much for the update! I can't wait for the next one!
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