hello! i've reviewed once or twice anonymously as emi before. i've read most of your stories, and i love them. :)

i feel like you have a tendency for being really mysterious at the beginnings of your stories. i'm always really confused. BUT it's a good thing, because it gets me hooked, and then i can't wait for you to finish the next chapter.

by the way, many many excellent authors on fp have been removing their stories and moving to livejournal due to multiple accounts of plagiarism. i was wondering if anyone has plagiarized your work and if you were also planning on removing your stories.

anyway, best of luck! and i can't wait for the next update! :P

HEY!

Big yay for u for posting this awesome chappie so soon! We finally no wot they r :D... well ish anyway lol The suspense was killing me hehe.

erm... Is it just me or is there more than meets the eye to Shay's and Kellen's relationship? Maybe it's just me... let me no if I'm not crazy :P

Have a good week!

Hope u can post soon!

BYE!

x x x

haha, i wasn't expecting demons. the more i read the more i found the braden family similar to the cullen family-you know, twilight. this really feels like a spinoff on twilight-just from the creature's point of view and not the human's. i don't know how you can but try to stray away from the same element that twilight uses? the whole "we're not humans" thing. it's still good but i don't think i can't not think about the cullen family while reading this.

Hey, I reviewed last chapter and I just got your reply.

I didn't mean to offend you, and I dont think its lame - not at all. I just dont like it as much as your other ones. As for why, I'm not really sure. Maybe because there isn't that much detail on what they are yet (last chapter) or I dont particularly understand all the characters. But I still think its a great story and I'm sure I'll warm up to it.

Again, I'm sorry to offend you - I didnt mean to come off that way.

It almost feels as if Kellan is going to be her love interest (he definitely has the strong personality to be the main male character), but that can't work...right?

I'm very curious to find out who her love interest is going to be...(the guy who drew demons?)...but I'm liking the pace you're taking, so I won't ask for anything at this point.

Well, except to beg for you to update soon!

Thanks for a great chapter!

- Rebekah

I am utterly intrigued. Great work so far :D

i believe shay shld practice her magic. i wonder how is she going to practice her magic. i feel that shay is quite perimistic.

Demons huh? Ouu very interesting.

I love how the story is coming together, I'd like to know how you're going to tie a romance into this plot ahaha

Once again, amazing writing!

Keep up the wonderful work :)

Yay! Another story!

Excited!

:)

Fabulous! I'm really excited that you've started a new story, considering I'm such a fan...

Shay has already got me roped in... I can't wait until the next chapter.

I'm confused, intrigued, entertained, and slightly werided out all at the same time. I guess thats a good thing lol! At first it was hard to go with it, but my interest is perkerd and I guess I'm a loyal reader of this story now. I read a few o your other work and i think your an amazing writer! yay power to the pens! (or in this case keyboards) :D

haha - okay no vampires. I was going to ask if they were all the same age, but you answered it towards the end.

*grins*

Very cool. I love reading your stuff. :D

You did a really fantastic job with description this chapter. I think I mentioned it in my last review and you really stepped it up. I like especially how you opened with images, hooked us with a scene, and then went on to tell the story. It really set the chapter up to be great. As far as a suggestion goes, the only thing I would remark on is a difference of charactering. Let me explain: you are an amazing character-creator, but all your leading ladies tend to have a lot of similarities. Which, is expected becasue they do reflect who you are as the author. I would suggest, however, that you give Shay mannerisms or certain personality traits that really set her a part not just from other characters in the story, but from all of your other characters in your stories. I'm sure you've been told this before, and you probably recognize it, but I wanted to let you know from my perspective. Sorry, if it was unwanted. In general, really fantastic job with progression. You're always excellent at development.

thanks

Amazing as always. Your stories never disappoint. I already love Shay and I already love Kellan, I love your awesome kickass characters and your awesome plots.

Love, love, love!

I look forward to your next chapter. :)

-dmn.