|Reviews for The Rabbit Hole|
| R. Ficst chapter 27 . 3/29
He has his wings and he's alive but he doesn't remember her! D:
| R. Ficst chapter 9 . 3/29
AHAHAHAHHA oh man. Naomi. 3
| R. Ficst chapter 8 . 3/29
Ahhh! Come on Alice! Be smarter than that! Why would she blab about such specifics of the riddles when she knows there are at least some dangerous people involved?
| R. Ficst chapter 4 . 3/29
The breaking and reassembly of the coffee mug is a really great detail. So far I feel like this story would work really well as a movie. The pace, characters, scenery potential, the coffee mug moment - very cinematic.
(Of course, it's a great read, too. I'm looking forward to following the rest of this journey down the rabbit hole.)
| megs chapter 28 . 2/17
I really loved this story, but I hated the ending. Why would you leave me hanging like that? :'( lol please make a short story as to how their lives end together! K? Thanks! :)
| What chapter 27 . 1/13
Jericho is alive? What. What. Omg thank god I think I was going to have an aneurism that Butterfly would be all alone. And how the eff can they just go back to their old boring lives?
| Wa chapter 24 . 1/13
Nooo if Jericho dies and butterfly has to be immortal I'm actually going to die of sadness! They are so perfect!
| Alyson chapter 14 . 1/13
I am in love with this story! It actually feels like I'm reading a real book. You are a fantastic writer! Great job! :3
| anetehftw chapter 1 . 1/2
Oh my fucjbanasnafkj hahaha! :D I don't know why but I LLLOOOOVE this story...so much! Woohoo woohoo... Maybe because it perfectly fits my taste. THIS kind of fantasy, THIS kind of romance, THIS kind of adventure. :D You do need to proofread or fix the typos maybe. Hehe, that'd make the story more enjoyable. I love the ending, although Butterfly and Jericho's pierced my heart just a bit. XD But it gave me a feeling like even though Jericho didn't remember her, he somehow still loved her. 3 3 This is your first story I read, gotta check the others. ;) Love you, have a nice day
| Alex J. Carter chapter 1 . 10/19/2013
Very interesting prologue. Love the riddle. I am very fasinated my the whole "Alice in Wonderland" story. Which is ironic with the new showing starting this month, "Once Upon a Time in Wonderland". Hope I can keep your work of art seperate from the show in my mind.
| Salma chapter 1 . 8/2/2013
This is my fourth time reading this book. Everytime I speak of books this one hits and I talk and rave about it so much I get myself back to reading it, thanks Penelope.
| Sneha903 chapter 1 . 6/23/2013
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| Fiery Dancer chapter 27 . 6/10/2013
Such a good story - some spelling mistakes ;) - but a great story! I particularly liked the interaction between butterfly and Jericho
| Wickey chapter 28 . 6/3/2013
Thank you for writing this story, I love it, and thank you for giving it a happy ending!
| Hannah chapter 27 . 6/1/2013
I… am completely lost. I really liked the story and how there were Alice in Wonderland references. The characters and plot were well developed and any spelling/grammar issues just seemed like typos. But this epiloque just lost me. I am completely confused right now. Really liked the story, though.