|Reviews for The Rabbit Hole|
| InkedGirl chapter 11 . 4/27/2012
Wow! Such an intense chapter. The description of Alice in the raging ocean was so realistic it had me seriously scared for a bit.
| InkedGirl chapter 2 . 4/27/2012
I love this! I can relate to Alice so easily, and Grey is just hilarious.
| DA-chen1 chapter 22 . 4/27/2012
I really love your story!
Great, Penny :-)
| DA-chen1 chapter 16 . 4/25/2012
Wonderful story, great characters and beautiful, wonderful description of ANYthing!
| AdiGal chapter 28 . 4/24/2012
Do you know how epic this story is? I know it's been a while since it's been up, but I just had to review.
I really, really enjoyed this. And sometime in the future if you feel like writing about supernatural awesomeness you should try and form another story in this wonderful world you've created here.
Kudos to you!
| DA-chen1 chapter 2 . 4/23/2012
Yeah, really cool chapter!
| DA-chen1 chapter 1 . 4/23/2012
Wow, interesting beginning! I really want to know, what's happening here!
| apples and pears chapter 28 . 4/15/2012
Grey is HOT. How did you write such an amazing character? Loved him too much!
| tiltedHead chapter 13 . 3/13/2012
I can't believe Alice talks silly suff, I thought she'd be like her father, adventurous and smart. I soo din't expect this to turn into a romance book, but it is rather funny.)
| Guest chapter 4 . 3/12/2012
LOL, its amazing the dress he bought fits alice's size.
| tiltedHead chapter 2 . 3/11/2012
ooo,funny mysterious and interesting,just like alice in wonderland,i adore this story just by reading the 1st chap.
| Kibblie chapter 27 . 2/9/2012
I just reread this story recently, and I must say, I love it more now that previously thought. :)
| Aderyn Azula chapter 27 . 1/14/2012
I just wanted to thank you for this amazing story! I literally stayed up all night reading, because I had to know how everything would turn out.
I love how the story is full of allusions to Alice in Wonderland without following the plot. It was fun to see characters though, who resembled those in Wonderland.
Alice, as a main character, was wonderful. I think that her journey probably more parallels, or at least has echos of the other Alice's journey. She and Grey are probably my two favorite characters, especially because of their dynamic together.
So, I was immensely impressed with the quality of this story. Everything was consistent, and the characters were all very real, despite any supernatural origins.
This review is really not doing justice to how engrossing your story was. So, I'll just say thank you again, for writing it.
(P.S. Happy 900th review!)
| use.less.woman chapter 28 . 1/7/2012
I dont read stories about Alice in Wonderland. I dont read stories about vampires, angels, demons, or anything under the Fantasy/Adventure tabs. I have over looked this story several times because of the description and name (even though it is highly recommended by so many on the site).
I should have read it earlier. You have created a wonderful story here. I absolutely loved it. It was well written and the characters were so loveable. I really appreciate that you did not write out the sex scenes. The whole delivery of the story is perfect.
I dont know if I have reviewed your other stories, but I have read them several times. Cole is probably one of my favorite characters ever. So I just wanted to take a minute to say great job!
| Ice Bubble chapter 27 . 1/5/2012