Reviews for Deep Embrace |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Oh how i hate goodbyes. so sad. |
![]() ![]() i liked this chapter 'cause it was romantic and stuff... good job work D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Ariella! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am so surprised that I hate Casmir. I mean, I usually root for his sort of character (tortured heroes are so awesome, yeah? Haha); however, Casmir is just so NEEDY. But we really can't avoid these kinds of turnouts. All in the name of good character development, yeah? :)) good job, and update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() AW! Wow. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, that makes me so sad. I liked Lir in the first draft... I'm hoping it was some kind of trick, so that he could keep his daughter alive and let everyone else think she was dead so she'd be safe or something... :( |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is really good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() scandal! Update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my goodness! I always thought that well compared to Nereus/Sedna, Casmir side of the story was less entertaining but whoa, this chapter was intense. I feel so bad for Ariella. You delivered the emotions so well. Thanks for the update! |
![]() ![]() HE HE!That's so cool that you mention Humboldt State, im just sayin i got super stoked, cause I go to Humboldt State and you never see little schools like HSU mentioned in these stories:D Much Appreciated! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() she had a kid! |
![]() ![]() ![]() more more more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hhahaha... poor Neri... he got weak in the knees over Sedna! XOXO |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hah... the first thing she thinks about how old he is is if he's married! XOXO |