This is so cute. He told her he loved her, that was what I wanted from the beginning. I think they are good for each other. With Cassy and Sedna the relationship is platonic. It looks more like friends sympathizing together other than lovers. With Nereus it is stronger, and more passionate. It is exciting to say the least.

Good job, I loved this chapter. Update soon!

Oh my god would make a cute couple. Yes, this absolutely work.

this is a great story :) i actually remember reading the original version, and i must say, i am definitely enjoying this version more. okay, as you know, you should probably read through your work more, you'd pick up some of the typos and a few grammar mistakes. the plot development is really good, as is character development. however, i kinda think Sedna is too... perfect. i can understand why Nereus is, but Sedna is human and i would think that she'd have more flaws about her. anyway... great work, keep it up and can't wait 'til next chapter! :D

Im sure you enjoyed that back rub way too much Nereus

waiting for the next chapter . plz post soon

This story would be my first fic in supernatiral besides vampire crap; and I totally am obsessed with it. The non-predictable storyline and all characters combined bring a great element for your readers. I hope that this ends great, as I constantly look for updates. Goodluck with your writing!

If you're serious about publishing, then my opinion is this. Stick with your first version. Like I said before, them getting together after this rewrite would be hard. The first version was smooth. Best of luck, as someone who worked in a bookstore for more than a year and saw some of the things that made it onto the shelves, I think you have a great chance to stand out.

Great chapter!

I think your writing is great. The plot development is good and so is the character development. Your scenes run smoothly together and you can feel the emotion from the words. If I do think of something I will tell you!

Keep up the good work!

Update soon!

This is an wonderful story! :D I really really really like it! Please write more :)

O... Nereus's dark and dangerous side. LOL. I bet he was real pleased/surprise to find Sedna. yes, poor Sedna. Must feel like a nightmare for her. I love the idea of how there is a fantasylike Merfolk in the waters in this story! Excellent!

LOVE this chapter! The way you portrayed the merman made me gush. He is so cool! I love stories with personalities like his. It's nice to see him with the power and seeing some of his dark side(well, not totally dark since he DID say he was in a good mood.) I could totally picture the scene and feel the arrogance air around him. :) Thanks for writing! It's hard to find a good merman story.

So I've actually read up to what u have updated but felt like it was kinda wrong of me not to review the chapter I've reads...here I am. :) So I'll write how I had felt the very first time I read this chapter.

i believe this(or the previous chapter) was what had me totally hooked into it. I love what happens and how it's written. the characters are unique and cool. I especially love Sedna's personality in this chapter oppose to some chapter later on. it was solid. BUT it still very good and I guess compared to what she went to, she had to change a little. Fish creature very cool. Oozes of arrogance and danger. :)

Favourite part: the part when he smiled at her(made me giggle) and LOVE the cliffhanger at the end. made my heart clench! Nicely written!

YESH! She isn't being overly pig headed about Nereus!

Fluffiness indeed. I just want to pinch Nereus's cheek.

YES! Sedna asked fish man out. This is going to be so exciting!

Great chapter.

Update soon!