He ain't right. I think this go around, it would be harder for Sedna to forgive him. (I mean this re write) What does he want? That's what she should've asked him. Besides apologizing. What place did he want to have in her life, after everything's said and done? And Casimir's part is new, I think? It would be nice if he could get away from his awful father. He deserves a break. And why oh why, did Sedna get so attached to Nereus? He was not that charming, but love is blind, right?

HE'S BACK! I was seriously upset for the last few chapters when all i was reading was Casmir...i mean he's sweet...but he's just not Nereus. I kept going back to the last chapter when he let her go and being depressed about how that was the last time we were ever going to hear his voice...but NO! And he's back and I'm happy and anxious for the rest! Keep it up! ;)

Poor Sedna!

Love, love, love, love the story ... And the fast updates, but I'wouldn't mind them a bit faster, ;)

wow. this original story made me really impressed! please update more! i cant wait to read the rest of your story. Great job.

Yes! I was right; I knew that Nereus was the blonde and I knew that he liked her and wouldn't just dump her. (even though I was angry all the same) and yeah you do need a better reader but if you overlook that this story is awesome, I love the idea. Can't wait til you update next!

Don't worry, this is purely commentary, no critiquing. :)

I keep wanting to grab Sedna, shake her like crazy, and be like "Don't you get it? He's using merman joojoo on you to make you like him more!" (by him I mean Casimir of course).

I'm glad Nereus is back. He always was my favorite. :)

I'm glad you left in the scene with Nereus. I alwasy liked that scene from the original version of this story. Keep up the good work.

Yay fish man came back! I like calling him fish man better than his name. Haha. Great chapter! I absolutely loved everything that happened. I hope Sedna can forgive Nereus. I want them together. Cant wait to see what's gonna happen next.

Update soon!

I knew that blond guy at the tea party was strange!

Aw, Casimir is so sweet, but I can't help it that I like Nereus. I'm sure that he wanted to tell her that she is important for him, or some cliché line like 'I love you'. See I'm happy Nereus is back, and I'm happier to know that he didn't leave her for dead, but in the contrary did it to protect her. I think that's something very significant to both of them. I really want Nereus to be with Sedna, but at the same time I don't want Casimir to be hurt. Maybe he'll find someone else. Anyways I'm very excited that you updated, and I'm impatient to know what will happen and who would Sedna end up with.

So Update Please :)

OMG! I loved it! Nerseus is such a creeper though. But a good one at that!

Okay so, I was one of the readers for when this story was originally posted. I figured I'd throw that out there, so everything I say makes sense.

As before, I find the story interesting enough, and I like Nereus most out of all the characters. I was wondering though, the story doesn't seem to have changed that much from the original? So does that mean this is just a reposting of it, or is it a rewrite?

If this is a rewrite, I was thinking it might be a good idea to look into those questionnaire things to make sure your characters aren't too Mary-Sue. I really do like the idea you've got going with merfolk and sea-creatures though. The characters just sometimes seem a little TOO perfect, specifically Sedna with men seeming to just fall all over her.

Also, do you have a beta-reader? Because I was reading through the whole thing, and I consistently noticed quite a few grammatical errors. Usually I think it's just that you accidentally drop words out of sentences, or use "see" when it should be "sea," and the like.

I know this probably seems like a bit much all at once, but I did just read through the whole thing at once, which is why I figured I'd do it all in one review instead of breaking it up. Also, I realize this probably is coming off kind of harsh, which I apologize for right now. I'm not trying to be mean or offensive in any way. I just know from experience that nice "I loved it" reviews are always mood boosting, but it's the ones that get right down to the dirty business that can end up being the most helpful.

Anyway, I really like the idea behind the story. I just thought I'd share some ideas for how it might be improved if you are rewriting it. :)

Nice chapter though I kind of miss Nereus. I liked him, he was fun. Poor Casimir is having a hard time, I hope everything is going to be well for him.

Continue on this way, it's great ;)

Loved the chapter!

But poor Casmir, I feel really bad for him.

Awesome chapter. Hope you update soon.