Ooo, chapter 51 and 52 are so good! Excitedily awaiting the next chapter. Keep up the good work!

wow..that left me speechless..cant wait for more

Holy crap! Sedna, just marry Nereus! You know you like him!

I enjoy your story, with your fast updates and the pleasant story line. I've said this before - reviewers get the *truck* over the grammar and punctuation, the writer has said she knows - just read and enjoy the flipping story, if not? RACK OFF!

I'll prolly read it again once you're done because its just a lovable story. Would it be so bad to have sedna & Nererus to have a crazy makeout session soon lol - they're too cute. Anyways take care!

I'm FREAKING OUT! Sedna! Say yes! He loves you. You love him. live happily ever after already!

Omg that's too sweet! 3 I hope Sedna agrees! Update! (:

YES YES YES YES YES. SEDNA MARRY HIM. BE CHANGED INTO A FISH PERSON TOO OR BECOME IMMORTAL OR SOMETHING JUST MARRY HIM! OH MY GOD THIS IS PERFECT. I love this story. Please, please, please let them get married in the end and have little half fish human babies and live happily ever after, after all the drama and angst and tragedy that will ensue finishes!

"Oh," Ione had to think about it. "I'll start like this. Not your type, Sedna. He seems little, I don't know what to say, but…he is out of your language."

He seems a little? He is out of your league?

Toxichick01: anyways I was AT the beach and I met this guy who is transferring in this year. he's a senior like us and guess what major he's in? Out of all the majors in the world…marine biology!

There's quite a number of fragments and grammar misplacements, but the two listed above is quite blatant. I enjoy your story lots and the idea behind it is great. However, I noticed that this is your 2nd or 3rd rewrite and there's still lots of mistakes. Perhaps you want to dissect the chapters a bit more before posting to lessen the chance of another rewrite in the future? I hope you don't take this badly, I just noticed that with what you're posting you might read it over and toss the whole thing out again and that's quite a bit of work my dear.

Weeee update! :D I hope Sedna and Nereus ends up together well (:

I really DO wish there were published books like this... its THAT good. XD

this was really good. there were a few places that i saw some errors in spelling, but other than that, its coming along great!

Aww hey don't change anything! It's going quite well and I like the pace. Seriously, I'm beginning to hate Casimir now too. It's so annoying. Nereus ftw! (:

theyre so cute.

Great story, I read the whole thing (expect for the new chapter) in two days. Would have been sooner but I needed to sleep. I'm all for less Casimir time and more Sedna and Nereus fluff time and I'm kind of hoping things don't end at the end of the summer for them. I loved it when they were in Italy together. Well I will be waiting for your next chapter, I hope you post again real soon.

Hi!

I just thought I would answer some of the questions you asked at the bottom of this chapter.

I agree with you on the Beta front. It would take me twice as long to update, and though there are some missing words (especially in the early chapters, however less so now), it doesn't effect the flow of the writing.

As for the relationship between Sedna, Casmir and Nereus, it's interesting to say the least.

Nereus began as this dark, hostile creature (he still is), whilst Casmir was this love stroke dreamer. When I first read those chapters, I was like 'Go Casmir!', but it's really impressive how you've totally flipped my opinion about Nereus, softening his character and making him more accessible.

You have shown readers the real story behind Casmir's aunt's story and then contrasted it with the one Nereus tells Sedna. Whether this is to show the misunderstanding between the groups, or that one of the pair is wrong, I'm not sure. However, I did sort of feel pissed off (if that makes sense) with Nereus for turning Sedna against Casmir. Nereus is my favourite, but Casmir is so caught up in his family's history with Nereus and in that sense innocent in it all, that I feel bad that Sedna seems quite anti-Casmir at the moment. It almost seems that Casmir is being victimised and ganged up on by Sedna and Nereus. I think it has to do with the fact, you have made Casmir out as such a soft hearted, 'good' character.

However saying all that, I still like what is going on; This is just my character reflections.

Just with this chapter, I was confused that Ione didn't tell Sedna that the cookies were from Casmir. Was it because she wanted her granddaughter to be with Nereus, or something along those lines?

Anyway, sorry for my ranting, I hope that helps,

Garneau.