Reviews for Beauty Is Pain
firefly114 chapter 1 . 1/11/2010
This is a very well written piece. I can totally relate!

I loved the twist at the ending. This is very realistic, great job!
Averybarbarian chapter 1 . 6/4/2009
lol! 'Tis quite an interesting story. 'Tis true too. Many girls want to feel noticed however, many do it in the worng way. Dressing in that way can cause issues and tends to attract males that you wouldn't want to attract. Her brother is right (and any good brother would say the same thing) but the driving need to feel wanted is often more important to a female. I wrote a poem somewhat simular to this but it mostly deels with makeup more so then cloths but it has the same need of acceptence. It's called Her Painted Mask if your interested.

Anywhoo it has great detail and the reader gets a really good idea of who the narerator is as a person. Great story! Well done )
Aurora Johnson chapter 1 . 6/4/2009
Oh i really love this!

You're an incredible writer -

i kind of started reading and forgot i was reading, cause i could picture it in my head so well.

It flows great, and you're description is cool!

I wish it was a story though... :P


Aurora x