Reviews for What's A Girl To Do?
CATpuccino chapter 23 . 9/2/2009
WOW. That's great!
pbgurl chapter 23 . 9/2/2009
YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY! Allen is staying!

But BOO! Cain needs to tell her why he kissed her. Why won't he just tell her :(

By the way how do you vote? I can't find a link.

-Liz :D
like-diamonds chapter 23 . 9/2/2009
hehe. indeed a very nice chapter. im glad allen is staying, he really was fun. cant wait for more.
monYY chapter 23 . 9/2/2009
please please tell me you're going to write more chapters all i toalk to my friends in school about is about this story so please don't make me wait ohh and do we still have to vote? cuz if we do i vote for Cain and Kyle he's cute and i think you're awesome and i really love your story thanx for filling my brain with this whole imagination and please please write more chapters soon

your friend

monYY
Arianna.is.the.Shit chapter 23 . 9/2/2009
OMG!

They are so more than just fake dating... .

And the entire Kyle and Cassie scene was so cute and i think its funny that Allen is always being verbally abused by Cassie lol

and i dont understand how Cassie could dislike scary movies they are the shiznitz

Allen is just the cutest and i am so happy he has become a permanent character in the story. I love the kid way to much and his personality . i cant believe that he is staying with them and andrew must be blowing balls on how pist he might be...

I LOVE ALLEN you have to set me up with him in the story PLEASE!
Aruka Ten chapter 23 . 9/2/2009
Yay! i luv Allen! anyway, great chapter. Cassie should have more sleepovers. because the mornings are so funny :). anyways, i would luv to vote 4 Cain again, and i too almost got grounded 4 logging on and read your story because it's just so darn good! thanx 4 updating so fast :)

~Aruka Ten
u wouldjustbe AWESO without ME chapter 23 . 9/2/2009
Hm filler chapter :(

I vote for ALLEN. It prolly wouldnt work out but i love him too much :)
HighOnBrokenWings chapter 12 . 9/2/2009
Okay, Cass is an attention seeker, and she's also quite up herself in a way. She takes things for granted. I was wondering if you realised she has these faults. But, next chapter (I came back to review this one, so that I'd be able to review the next one, if after continuing to read, I had something to say) When Cain asks her if shes okay... Well, isn't it the norm to assure people that you're okay, so that you're not sharing that burden around? I dont know... There's something about Cassidy that's not quite likable enough. She seems like that girl thats "nice" to everyone, and hates "gossip" But is a hypocrite... And fake. But maybe its jus me, because I know someomne like that, and I really despise people like it. Maybe thats why I cant relate very well to her, and dont really like her... But when they were at the movies she called herself a young, petite, pretty girl... Yeah... She wasnt even kind of kidding about the prettyness... Or anything... I dont know... She seems a little up herself, like she's the only one in the world that matters.

Also, when we first meet Cain, you give it away that it's him, by saying "I didnt find out till later that it was Cain." It wrecks that whole mysterious thing you had going on there. It would have been better if you had just left it as all about the hot stranger, maybe add in some nudges about who it could be.

Also, there is the matter of almost everything seeming perfect... Up till this point, that is. This reality check was good, though, there could be some more hints or something about her past... You know, I'm not the best at doing that, so maybe I should shut my mouth on that account :P

Overall, though (Despite all the critisms I've had) this is really really good :D I like the story line, the characters are defined and different, and I love the Asian ninga thing you had going on when she was talking to Jade. That was priceless :D

I must read more later, but I've got to head off to school now. I hope you get something out of my critism, but dont take it to heart. You're a really good writer :D
Caleyy chapter 23 . 9/2/2009
CAIN! CAIN! CAIN! CAIN! CAIN! CAIN! :D
Darksunshiine chapter 22 . 9/2/2009
I pick Kyle
FizzBuzz chapter 23 . 9/2/2009
hmm ok so before this chapter I would have one hundred percent said Cain...but now, im liking Kyle more! can you maybe do a pov in somebody else character...like Cain! lol

wicked story! :D
EmmaWoodhouse88 chapter 23 . 9/2/2009
Yay! Allen is cute.. By the way, my vote is still on Cain! :D
rathina chapter 23 . 9/2/2009
YAY ALLEN!

i love him

but not as much as cain

speaking of cain he needs to explain why he kisses her

haha

anyways

1 more vote for cain please

haha
My Sea of Stardust chapter 22 . 8/31/2009
i love your story! im like addicted! i keep getting in trouble for sneaking onto the computer to read more! (im currently grounded P)

KEEP WRITING! I
InsideMyRainbowEyes chapter 22 . 8/31/2009
I liked it so much! KYLE! Update Soon!
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