Reviews for Your Mother
tonight we bloom chapter 1 . 7/12/2009
that was fantastic! such beautiful imagery

in just three lines.

i would love more opinions from you

on some of my new work :D
lymli chapter 1 . 6/24/2009
wow, it's pretty peaceful, like a dream, I think everybody wants something like that.
Isca chapter 1 . 6/5/2009
"When she sleeps, she dreams of blue wind." The water imagery in the first part of the haiku set up the tone for this next line perfectly-it's so beautiful and serene. :)
MallowsWins chapter 1 . 6/5/2009
I love how calming and free this is. Fantastic imagery.

Peace, Daze
LittleLoser.AndRoloLamperouge chapter 1 . 6/5/2009
what a lovely the blue wind line!

amavian chapter 1 . 6/4/2009