|Reviews for Your Mother|
| tonight we bloom chapter 1 . 7/12/2009
that was fantastic! such beautiful imagery
in just three lines.
i would love more opinions from you
on some of my new work :D
| lymli chapter 1 . 6/24/2009
wow, it's pretty peaceful, like a dream, I think everybody wants something like that.
| Isca chapter 1 . 6/5/2009
"When she sleeps, she dreams of blue wind." The water imagery in the first part of the haiku set up the tone for this next line perfectly-it's so beautiful and serene. :)
| Dale Christopher chapter 1 . 6/5/2009
I love how calming and free this is. Fantastic imagery.
| LittleLoser.AndRoloLamperouge chapter 1 . 6/5/2009
what a lovely imagery...love the blue wind line!
| amavian chapter 1 . 6/4/2009