|Reviews for Retrospect|
| Dustin chapter 1 . 6/22/2009
I like this a lot. Very different for you, I like it a lot. good use of rhythym, I'm sorry I haven't been checking my FP updates.
| no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 6/7/2009
This sounds like it's about prom. I don't know if I'm right or not, but it works for me. Haha. I don't know why, but I really liked the "fuzzy glow" part; it's such a great way to express that drunken stupor at the end of the night. The end is a great juxtaposition. Nice poem. Keep writing! :)