Reviews for Salt
LaughsWithTears chapter 1 . 1/23/2011
Lovely. Absolutely spectacular.
Orsa Terminus chapter 1 . 12/26/2009
I'm slightly ashamed to say that I rarely, if ever, review, but something about this story made me change my mind.

I could say that the lack of capitalization caught me off guard and made me click that review button, but that's only partially the case. It was the fluidity and originality of the piece that really did it, and I just felt that something this good really deserved it. So congradulations, dear, you've written an amazing piece of work.
open mic nights chapter 1 . 6/5/2009
You have so much potential.

FIX YOUR GRAMMAR!

Good descriptions.

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE FIX YOUR GRAMMAR!

I enjoyed it.. until the grammar got to me...

So it's a lovely concept, except PLEASE fix your grammar. Get a beta if you need!

But good start. D