|Reviews for Accented Rhythm|
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 7/28/2009
"Poetic times has come to past"... have
"Dreams crosses over line of reality to find it's cure"... cross
Your rhyme scheme changes here, which I didn't really like. I also think the capitalization is odd at the end. Also, in the beginning you repeat the word feeling a lot. Also, the lines didn't all seem to connect.
That said, the lines were good. I liked the part about death and heartbeats. Those were really true statements and well expressed. Nice job.